Hungry hungry vampires

What I like about this piece right off the bat is the expressions conveyed between the two. It does do a good job of showing their intentions and emotions. What I'm not too crazy about is the pure flat color on everything. It makes it all completely flat (obviously). A little shadow and highlight on the clothes could really liven it up and help define that form. Also what I notice is that you have a pretty decent knowledge on clothing and drapery but in some areas it can be perked up a bit. By that I mean like around the arms of each character the way the folds drop make the cloth seem too stiff. Overall nice piece though it has potential keep it up dude.